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Re: I don't know what to call this

Post by Alex Steiner on Sat Jun 04, 2011 4:32 pm

Reverse Simplicity wrote:Was the man doing anything else while eating his meal?
The man was not doing anything else while eating his meal, his attention solely on the food (at least at first).

Was the man doing anything else while writing the note?
The man was not doing anything else while writing the note, at least observably, no telling what was going through his mind.

Would the meal have eventually killed him?
The meal did not and would not directly kill the man, but it did contribute to his decision to commit suicide.

Does the man play farmville?
While the man's personal sanity has been brought into question by his suicide, he did not play farmville.

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Re: I don't know what to call this

Post by Reverse Simplicity on Sun Jun 05, 2011 7:05 am

Your filler is bloody confusing. And sometimes a direct contradiction to truth

Is the man a very successful chef?
after taking 3 bites of his meal did he realize he could no longer taste?
Was the note a list of ingredients?
Was the note a recipe?

Does what is written on the note contribute to his decision to commit suicide?

"at least at first" implies that something did happen during his mean. Was a physical occurrence? Was it a mental recall?


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Re: I don't know what to call this

Post by Alex Steiner on Mon Jun 06, 2011 4:11 pm

Reverse Simplicity wrote:Your filler is bloody confusing. And sometimes a direct contradiction to truth
Never contradictory, as far as I can tell. Maybe misinterpretable, but never a direct contradiction. I'll ease off on it anyway Razz .

Is the man a very successful chef?
The man is not a successful chef.
after taking 3 bites of his meal did he realize he could no longer taste?
The man did not realise he could no longer taste after taking 3 bites. He could still taste.
Was the note a list of ingredients?
The key part/s of the letter's text is above. At least I think I put in up here. Had stuff about a tragedy. It was not a list of ingredients.
Was the note a recipe?
See above

Does what is written on the note contribute to his decision to commit suicide?
Are we talking about the same note? I assume you are referring to the letter the man wrote prior to shooting himself. He wrote it, after deciding to end his life. It was not a recipe.

"at least at first" implies that something did happen during his mean. Was a physical occurrence? Was it a mental recall?
During the course of eating the meal, the man experienced "a mental recall", which took his attention away from the food itself.


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Re: I don't know what to call this

Post by Darth Skywalkerbacca on Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:03 pm

OH MY GOD! It is the plot to the next series of House
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Re: I don't know what to call this

Post by Alex Steiner on Tue Jun 14, 2011 2:21 am

Darth Skywalkerbacca wrote:OH MY GOD! It is the plot to the next series of House
Indeed.


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Re: I don't know what to call this

Post by Sid_The_Kid on Tue Nov 01, 2011 4:48 pm

does how the man got his limp impact on the suicide?
did the man suffer from a disease?
did the man have family problems(5years ago or present)?
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Re: I don't know what to call this

Post by Darth Skywalkerbacca on Wed Nov 02, 2011 11:47 am

did the animal he kill give him the limp?
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